What is it with all the haiku recently? They’re cropping up everywhere.
It must be the poetry of instant gratification, I guess–short, and with simple and direct rules. Hmm.
That’s very cool, my days and nights bleed together too, like for example right now.
EC
i soooo wanna crack a menstruation joke here… but this is so darn nice, i’ll only think it quietly to myself.
haiku is generally corny, but that was beautiful…
me! i did a haiku a day for a week & now all you bastids are copying me. because it’s all about memememe! right, spanky??
that was lovely.
You’re so talented. “…I know by now that you’ll arrive by the time I stop waiting…”
well I fucked up that comment. LOL
i like…the new skin
your napkin poem….xoxo
hi there! initially i wanted to write to say that i love the look of your website. and then i read about your online romance, you two are so cute. best of luck to the both of you.
such the sweet, talented, sensitive boy….
exquisite, as always. <3
oh who are you foolin- you are THE senso- boy and youl ove it, we love it, the universe loves it, yo
Where were you when you were seized by napkin inspiration?
That’s really cool
senso boy
so pure and unobstructed
life is sweet and sticky in your eyes
love is smitten with you
nice haiku, awesome xanga.
I wish I knew how to do the cool things you do to your web site.
your handwriting kicks ass D
very nice
ohh that beats my pregnancy bitching haiku’s, yers had like vision and stuff.
one man named Richard
the girls hearts bleed red for you
drip drip drip, you bum!
Very nice. And I love the new look. It’s been awhile since I’ve stopped by…I know my presence is missed much. Take care and congrats on your premium spotlight. You deserve it!
love your page!
Tight….
why can’t you just bitch about stuff like everybody else? why you gotta be so damned artistic?
You a very smart
But you needed a coaster
For that coffee stain
—-
Oh! That’s not coffee
That is your stinky spooge stain
That’s so very gross
Well, I’m a step ahead of you, cause I actually read your post. Granted this is a bit shorter than mine was so I’ll cut ya some slack.
And by the way – it’s always good to find a fellow Douglas Adams fan! =)
Ohohoh, and the haiku was nice, I should throw that in somewhere lest you think I didn’t like it.
Zeeple florb
eep kligoo
Narboza?
*UPROAR OF APPLAUSE* ..lol. I have company and they are reading with me. It’s annoying. But they like your stuff. :X
So simple, yet so beautiful.
I like your haiku Everyone writes haikus now But yours are unique
–J
wait, what do you mean that’s not spinach?! oh my god, don’t tell me it’s a patch of pubic hair. you’re scaring me!!!
I totally abused my top spot in the comments by saying something tediously nice instead of nonsensical statements like
550 pieces fully interlocking. Reproduced in fine art
I’m terribly sorry
have you ever kept yourself awake at night twirling your brain around a concept so irresistible, that it transcends the importance of sleep. so important that it overcomes your instincts to lie awake in the dark, and instead you turn on the light to write down this ingenious idea which has enslaved the focus of your thought. despite the knowledge that you must wake up in two hours, and despite the objection of your biological clock… this thought is so precious that it triumphs over all of these natural constructs so that it won’t be replaced by a meaningless dream… …it is an uncalled for satisfaction.
i think all writers know what i’m talking about…
simple, yet unique. i like it very much. wish i was more poetic.
I dont know how you do it Richard, but you can turn my normally ice cold heart into goo with a few lines of simple words. Damn you’re good. That was beautiful. *UnF* *UnF* *UnF* THREE *UnF*s up!
i love haiku’s… good one’s of course… there’s just something about them.
dangit! i just realized that would have been an AWESOME name for my puppy! crap.
That was lovely.
~ K
you are so lovely a person.
i’m zangazineing this one for you.
MAN, look at all these comments!
Props, was just browsing around and saw your xanga on the spotlight. You have a very nice xanga!
wonderfully well-done, I enjoyed that–lovely handwriting and all. wish I could give more than 2.
You are such a talented writer!
Great page, too!
You rock our haiku world, yo.
just stoppin by, i love your site (you don’t know me) and i wanted to add you, but i don’t know how
-me-
Totally unrelated to your entry…but you are so fucking hot. Goddamn.
so where do i click for 80 billion eprops?
Is that your handwriting? I am studying your handwriting. You have remarkable handwriting. But you won’t even read this, so sigh.
Yes, we will get to see the portrait. I just have to scan.
what font did you use?
oooh…i love your handwriting….
…nice. MuSe
that was really nice, words and image
wow, this is a good haiku considering others that I’ve seen. ^_^
Nice.
i really enjoyed the imagery of your haiku. something about the authenticity and genuiness of the ink on paper.
liked it but i also didn’t …. i have to say that the way the phrases weren’t contained in each line but flowed into the next was a bit distracting. despite that i still enjoyed it. nice imagry, thoughtful. (i’ve tried to write haiku but i find that i enjoy my own far more than anyone else does- i’m not much of a poet). oh, i’ll also add that i’m act liking your xanga (i don’t most). be happy.
amazing
peace
*me*
excellent…
Great and thoughtful site…your poems caress my retnas.
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Eloquently said. Beautifully made.
What is it with all the haiku recently? They’re cropping up everywhere.
It must be the poetry of instant gratification, I guess–short, and with simple and direct rules. Hmm.
That’s very cool, my days and nights bleed together too, like for example right now.
EC
i soooo wanna crack a menstruation joke here… but this is so darn nice, i’ll only think it quietly to myself.
haiku is generally corny, but that was beautiful…
me! i did a haiku a day for a week & now all you bastids are copying me. because it’s all about memememe! right, spanky??
that was lovely.
You’re so talented.
“…I know by now that you’ll arrive
by the time I stop waiting…”
well I fucked up that comment. LOL
i like…the new skin
your napkin poem….xoxo
hi there!
best of luck to the both of you.
initially i wanted to write to say that i love the look of your website. and then i read about your online romance, you two are so cute.
such the sweet, talented, sensitive boy….
exquisite, as always. <3
oh who are you foolin- you are THE senso- boy and youl ove it, we love it, the universe loves it, yo
Where were you when you were seized by napkin inspiration?
That’s really cool
senso boy
so pure and unobstructed
life is sweet and sticky in your eyes
love is smitten with you
nice haiku, awesome xanga.
I wish I knew how to do the cool things you do to your web site.
your handwriting kicks ass
D
very nice
ohh that beats my pregnancy bitching haiku’s, yers had like vision and stuff.
one man named Richard
the girls hearts bleed red for you
drip drip drip, you bum!
Very nice. And I love the new look. It’s been awhile since I’ve stopped by…I know my presence is missed much. Take care and congrats on your premium spotlight. You deserve it!
Tight….
why can’t you just bitch about stuff like everybody else? why you gotta be so damned artistic?
You a very smart
But you needed a coaster
For that coffee stain
—-
Oh! That’s not coffee
That is your stinky spooge stain
That’s so very gross
Well, I’m a step ahead of you, cause I actually read your post. Granted this is a bit shorter than mine was so I’ll cut ya some slack.
And by the way – it’s always good to find a fellow Douglas Adams fan! =)
Ohohoh, and the haiku was nice, I should throw that in somewhere lest you think I didn’t like it.
Zeeple florb
eep kligoo
Narboza?
*UPROAR OF APPLAUSE* ..lol. I have company and they are reading with me. It’s annoying. But they like your stuff. :X
So simple, yet so beautiful.
I like your haiku
Everyone writes haikus now
But yours are unique
–J
wait, what do you mean that’s not spinach?! oh my god, don’t tell me it’s a patch of pubic hair. you’re scaring me!!!
I totally abused my top spot in the comments by saying something tediously nice instead of nonsensical statements like
550 pieces fully interlocking. Reproduced in fine art
I’m terribly sorry
have you ever kept yourself awake at night
twirling your brain around a concept so irresistible,
that it transcends the importance of sleep.
so important that it overcomes your instincts to lie awake in the dark,
and instead you turn on the light to write down this ingenious idea which has enslaved the focus of your thought.
despite the knowledge that you must wake up in two hours,
and despite the objection of your biological clock…
this thought is so precious that it triumphs over all of these natural constructs
so that it won’t be replaced by a meaningless dream…
…it is an uncalled for satisfaction.
i think all writers know what i’m talking about…
simple, yet unique. i like it very much. wish i was more poetic.
I dont know how you do it Richard, but you can turn my normally ice cold heart into goo with a few lines of simple words. Damn you’re good. That was beautiful.
*UnF*
*UnF*
*UnF*
THREE *UnF*s up!
i love haiku’s… good one’s of course… there’s just something about them.
dangit! i just realized that would have been an AWESOME name for my puppy! crap.
That was lovely.
~ K
you are so lovely a person.
i’m zangazineing this one for you.
MAN, look at all these comments!
Props, was just browsing around and saw your xanga on the spotlight. You have a very nice xanga!
wonderfully well-done, I enjoyed that–lovely handwriting and all. wish I could give more than 2.
You are such a talented writer!
Great page, too!
You rock our haiku world, yo.
just stoppin by, i love your site (you don’t know me) and i wanted to add you, but i don’t know how
-me-
Totally unrelated to your entry…but you are so fucking hot. Goddamn.
so where do i click for 80 billion eprops?
Is that your handwriting? I am studying your handwriting. You have remarkable handwriting. But you won’t even read this, so sigh.
Yes, we will get to see the portrait. I just have to scan.
what font did you use?
oooh…i love your handwriting….
…nice.
MuSe
that was really nice, words and image
wow, this is a good haiku considering others that I’ve seen. ^_^
Nice.
i really enjoyed the imagery of your haiku. something about the authenticity and genuiness of the ink on paper.
liked it but i also didn’t …. i have to say that the way the phrases weren’t contained in each line but flowed into the next was a bit distracting. despite that i still enjoyed it. nice imagry, thoughtful. (i’ve tried to write haiku but i find that i enjoy my own far more than anyone else does- i’m not much of a poet). oh, i’ll also add that i’m act liking your xanga (i don’t most). be happy.
amazing
peace
*me*
excellent…
Great and thoughtful site…your poems caress my retnas.