February 27, 2003
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an untitled love poem, dedicated to no one, to be read aloud, slam-style
i need someone
to make love to me
when i say need, i mean “want”.
i don’t need
it
like food or air or fire.
but like…
long long hair
stuck on the walls of my shower.
when i say love, i mean LOVE.
all capitals,
because it all means so much
and it should
(to the both of us).
Comments (25)
Hot. I like.
–L
yeah, I really dig that. almost as much as kicking puppies.
*LOVE*
those long hairs… assure me they are from some hot girls head and not your loins.
yes it should
“those long hairs… assure me they are from some hot girls head and not your loins”
HAHAAHAHHAAH!!!! oh that was so funny.
oh yes, i was going to comment… i think i need that as well…. join our club?
*le SIGH*
Gosh damn yo…that was fresh…
I wish someone had written that for me…
*sobs*
We all ‘want’ someone…and we all ‘need’ love, I think with me, its just that i don’t want what other people want in a relationship…and i always love people who are unattainable to me. But nevermind me..your wonderful sweetheart, and i hope you get the lady you deserve one day. Maybe i’m missunderstanding this all together…Love confuses me…lol
You mean you wouldn’t bitch cause some hair got stuck to the shower wall!?! You get props for that alone.
We all want love.. we just need to learn to love ourselves before we let someone else love us.
i need to go spend a moment alone now, please excuse me. heh…
if only i could attribute the hair in the shower to something that good.
the crack in the hallway drywall, now…
good stuff…
is the “slam-style” the way the poem’s intended to be read or the way you want to be made love to?
am I always the last chic to comment? I hate being a groupie
awesome!
awesome.
rock’em sock’em awesome, richard!
Ooops. My bad! That was actually me writing, I’m working on my friends Xanga, and I accidently forgot to log out of his blog! *blush* Anyhow, HI! *waves* I’m Jesi! *wink*
yeah, see, i’m in it for the meaningless sex and extra money…
I like the shower part =)
mmmmmm yeah
why richard i wouldn’t expect anything less from you dear!
This was great.
Maybe I should go to some poetry readings for once? It’s been a while.
You sound like a hopeless romantic. More power to you.